Monday, August 30, 2010

exposition

In the show "Urinetown: The Musical" (yes, that's what it's called - awesome, isn't it?) the opening number is called Too Much Exposition. As you may guess, the song sets up the show, introducing the audience to the main characters and setting, as well as the central conflict (a water shortage has made private toilets a thing of the past, and now people have to pay to pee - seriously, it's an awesome concept). The narrator, Officer Lockstock, informs Little Sally that "nothing kills a show like too much exposition".

I was talking to a fellow writer today about just that, though our subject was novels rather than musicals. In all stories, writers have to "lay the pipes". That's the fancy writing jargon for setting up the basic situation and characters in a way that the reader will understand. This makes sense if the character that narrates the story is actually telling it directly to the reader, i.e. Sherwood Smith's Crown Duel, where the heroine Mel is recording her memories for future generations to read. The very first line of the book is, "I hope any of my descendants reading this know exactly what the Covenant and the Code of War are, but there is always the chance that my story has been copied by the scribes and taken to another land that will consider Remalna distant and its customs strange." Obviously, exactly that has happened, since at least this particular reader had no idea what the Covenant or the Code of War were upon reading the prologue. It therefore makes sense for Smith to explain things in detail that might be common or well-known to the narrator herself; even though she knows who all of the characters are, she actually knows that her reader doesn't, and so she has a legitimate reason to lay it all out on the table.

Pipe-laying also generally works with "I fell down a rabbit hole and ended up in another, strange land" stories, because the character is discovering everything right along with the reader. Harry Potter lives under some stairs with an aunt, uncle and cousin who hate his eleven-year-old guts - that's really all the exposition you need to jump into the beginning of The Sorcerer's Stone. It's not until owls start throwing letters down the chimney that some sort of further explanation is required, but because Harry doesn't know anything himself, the reader has a chance to learn about it in a believable way. Hagrid tells him that he's a freakin' wizard; Ron tells him that Dumbledore is headmaster of Hogwarts. It makes sense for characters to spout random bits of knowledge like that, because Harry doesn't know them himself yet.

But the majority of the time, exposition is just silly. In a first person, stream-of-thought sort of book, there is no reason for the narrator to think expository thoughts. "I decided to go find Ted, my oldest brother." The narrator, whoever they are, already knows that Ted is their oldest brother. The only reason for that little sidenote to make an appearance is to acquaint the reader with a basic sense of who Ted is, and how he relates to the main character. The same thing goes for, "We decided to meet at the Spot, a hollow log where we had been meeting secretly since we were ten," and, "In two weeks we would leave for Florida, where Joe, my dad's best friend, lived." Yes, readers are used to that sort of thing. I'm not exactly complaining about it. But really, it doesn't make a whole lot of sense.

I just read Incarceron (a great synergy of fantasy and futuristic scfi that I highly recommend) and one thing I actually paused and noticed was the lack of exposition. The story literally throws you into the center of it with no explanation - you know that Finn is the main character, but that's kind of it. He doesn't go into any explanations about who he is, what he's doing, or why he's doing it. There's just a lot of action that leaves you guessing. And then when the other main character Claudia was narrating, she didn't go into detail about her life or the people in it right off the bat, either; the thing that really jarred me was that she thought about a character, Jared, and didn't offer a sidenote about who he was. For an entire chapter, I was left wondering about who this Jared guy was and how she knew him. Not because his identity was a big secret, or because the plot revolved around him; just because Claudia had no reason to qualify her own thoughts.

I can't help but wonder what it would be like to write an entire story without any awkward exposition at all. Would it be impossible? Would the story make any sense? Could readers infer enough, and put together pieces on their own?

Of course, this is somewhat of a moot point when it comes to Thistleswitch. As the third person omniscent narrator, I know all, including the fact that my readers don't know anything unless I deign to tell it to them. The Thistleswitch style hinges on the fact that readers don't know anything about the world, and the narrator has to explain it. (On a slightly related tangent, I hear the narrator as a slightly snobbish British man. Make of that what you will.) In fact, I just recently finished giving a rundown of all seven princesses of Afalanphra, which was about as much exposition at one time as I could handle. How did I deal with it? In proper Thistleswitch style, of course! I plopped this smack dab in the middle of it all:

Perhaps you are growing weary of what seems to be countless paragraphs of exposition on a seemingly endless number of princesses. If this is that case, I shall humbly remind you that nearly all great works of literature require a few explanatory clauses; point out that you are more than halfway finished; and call to your attention how much more tiring it must have been for a single parent to go about raising a seemingly endless number of princesses, rather than simply reading about them from the comfort of a living room couch, queen-sized bed, or wherever you happen to be at this particular moment in your life.

Thursday, August 26, 2010

irvine's guide to success!!

Today, we feature another delightful link in the Random Helpful Links for Aspiring Authors series. Published author Ian Irvine's Guide to Success is another great resource that I've collected in my blog/website travels.

What I love about Irvine's site is that he doesn't take it too seriously. So many resources about writing and publishing make me downright depressed, with all of their, "The percent of people who actually get their novel published is .0000000001%," and, "You will have to edit your piece-of-crap manuscript so many times that you won't even recognize it by the time it's 'finished'," nonsense. Irvine gives real advice, but does it in an upbeat way that leaves me saying, "Yeah, I can do 10 rewrites! No problem!"

Probably my favorite tip from him is the very first one: Be original but not TOO original. I feel like so many writers these days complain about things being cliche, while Irvine hits the nail right on the metaphorical head: "what ordinary readers want is more of the same, only a little bit different." Go into your local bookstore and you can find at least twenty different vampire-forbidden-love books, because vampires are the most popular thing since sliced bread. Yes, it's overused, and yes, the non-vampire-obsessed crowd is sick of the genre, but they get published and they sell because vampires are "in" right now. "Cliched" stuff is cliche because it works, and I think it's important for folks to remember that.

Alright. Enough of my ranting for the day.

Wednesday, August 25, 2010

nanowriwha?

I've recently realized that over the past month or so, I've mentioned NaNoWriMo casually in conversations, and that the people I was talking to probably thought I was babbling gibberish. Ah, well.

For those of you who don't know, NaNoWriMo stands for National Novel Writing Month. Their shiny website is here. Basically, NaNo is an organized event that takes place over the course of the month of November, in which people from across the country try to write 50,000 original words in 30 days. It's meant to help people in that previously mentioned 80% of people who think they'll write a novel actually finish one and become part of the two percent who do. Apparently 50,000 words is an average length for a novel.

Anyway, I'm a big fan of NaNo; it forces writers to stop lollygagging and lazing about, and actually try to meet goals and deadlines that they set for themselves. Even notoriously anti-deadline writers like yours truly. NaNo focuses entirely on quantity, rather than quality - to succeed, it's best to remove the Backspace key from your keyboard entirely. Most people agree that once you've finished your 50,000 words and read over your new manuscript, you'll find that approximately 45,000 of those words are utter crap. But 5,000 of them will be completely wonderful, all the more so because you wrote them yourself. And, in order to edit a novel and get it to be great, you have to have a novel written. Which is why NaNo is so helpful to struggling writers.

I've participated in NaNo for the past two years, and hit over 50,000 words both times. I fully acknowledge that most of what I wrote deserves to be drenched in lamesauce - I've actually snorted in disdain while rereading some of it. But, as any good writer will tell you, practice is the key to becoming a skilled writer. The first thing...the first fifty things...you write won't be the next Pride and Prejudice or Jurassic Park. But each thing you write will get you one step closer to it.

I fully encourage any author-hopefuls out there to take part in NaNo this year. It's loads of fun, and loads of help. If you succeed, you'll be on top of the world. Even if you don't, you'll accomplish something and get writing practice along the way. It's two months away - start brainstorming now. Just remember - you can't write any of those 50,000 words until November 1st.

Tuesday, August 24, 2010

word cloud

Just for kicks, I felt like making a word cloud for Thistleswitch. A word cloud is a, um, cloud of words...you put whatever body of text you want in, and it creates a graphic that shows the words that appear the most; the more times its used, the larger it appears.



So Merry, Niko and Aries are the most popular words. Who'd have guessed? And then we've got hero and princess, and Riddle and Quicken, and of course, Shift. Looks pretty much how I expected it would. But it's fun to do, nevertheless.

Sunday, August 22, 2010

how to format a manuscript

Pretty much just what the title says. We're celebrating my stepmom's birthday, so I figured I would just share another handy link.

How to Format a Manuscript, for your viewing pleasure. Granted, I'm not positive that this is the correct way, but it comes recommended by...some author. I forget which - I've been perusing several blogs lately.

Friday, August 20, 2010

build your own fantasy world

Another post in my Random Helpful Links for Aspiring Authors series. (That I have just christened this moment.)

Fantasy Worldbuilding Questions at the Science Fiction and Fantasy Writers of America website is one of those fantastic things that you can spend hours reading and thinking about when you really don't want to go to sleep or do your calculus homework. It's comprised of approximately a million questions to help you figure out all of the specific little details about your very own fantasy world, to make sure that it rings true to readers. How does magic factor in? What sort of government does it have? What's the proper way to set the table?

Though I didn't discover this site until well into the Thistleswitch process, I think it's fantastic. It forces you to think about things that may not even actually matter to the story itself, but that flesh out the world for your own mind. And it's a pretty dang fun writing exercise to decide on the answers. The entire process is based on your own imagination and creativity - if you can think it up, it can exist in your world. Not that this isn't the case when you're not using a handy dandy online outline, of course; but the outline saves you the trouble of thinking up the questions, and lets you focus on the answers themselves.

It makes me want to make up a bunch of fantasy worlds - ones that I don't even have a story for - just so that I can flesh them out and make them unique.

Thursday, August 19, 2010

myows

Over our Spring Break vacation this year, I read several issues of Wired and Popular Science - not only were they really the only things to read in our rental house once I finished the books I'd brought, but I'm a science geek at heart. Anyway, in one issue of PopSci, they mentioned the MYOWS, or "My Original Works" website.

MYOWS is a site for proving copyrights, basically, in a world where more and more created material is accessible online. You upload your stories, computer graphics, music, or whatever other digital media you've created, and it gets a date and time stamp that can be cited if any stinky people somehow get a hold of your work and try to pass it off as their own.

I checked up on it today, and other than PopSci it's been recommended by quite a lot of people and publications. So, since I've been letting people wander amuck with copies of my story while they read it (not that I don't trust my friends, mind you, but still) I decided that I might as well make an account and prove to the online world that Thistleswitch was mine as of August 19, 2010. I've been thinking about sticking some other writing, or maybe some of the stuff I made in computer graphics class, on there as well.

Anyway, just in the interest of including anything that might possibly be helpful to any other author-hopefuls out there, I thought I'd mention it.

toot, toot

Is it lame to laugh at something you yourself wrote? Not that I don't acknowledge that I'm lame for a variety of reasons, but this one seems almost conceited. Like tooting my own metaphorical horn. I laugh far too much when I reread Thistleswitch. Ah, well.

In other news, I tried to write a synopsis for the basic plot of the Unnamed Companion, and failed miserably. In further news, I still have no name for the Unnamed Companion. At the very least, I wish I had a clever working title, but I've got diddly squat.

At least the story itself has started taking shape. It's strange - there are parts of it that I really, really want to write. I've been dreaming about them, even. And then there are sections that I have no ideas for, that I'm wary of attempting. We'll see how it goes once...I'm about three-fourths of the way through the prologue right now, and I think I know where I'm going with the first part of the first chapter, at least. After that...the magic that is Thistleswitch will need to get my creative juices pumping.

Monday, August 16, 2010

synopsis attempt #1

I had a go at writing a thistleswitch-y synopsis for Thistleswitch. I'm still not happy with it...but at least it's something, I suppose.

Aries Phoenixflight is a hero, though not strictly speaking the hero of this story. While on a quest to marry the most beautiful princess in the world, he encounters a witch who smells of moldy goat cheese, a palace of peerless pulchritude, a thief-turned-fiddle-player, and an award-winning Chicken Marsala recipe.

Merry Songchaser is the heroine of this story, though not a hero in the professional sense. When Aries Phoenixflight travels to the town of Tipsidy in search of a remarkable fiddle – Tipsidy being the town where Merry was born and raised by her pa, a celebrated cabinet- and fiddle-maker – Merry tags along with the hero and his disgruntled assistant in search of adventure. She soon finds herself dealing with fruit flinging pistols, fire-resistant firewood, card games without any rules, golden goose-egg omelets, and much more adventure than she actually anticipated.

And, on top of the death-defying drama (for all but Aries, who, as a hero, cannot die until his quest is completed), happily ever afters (for those characters lucky enough to marry royalty, that is), and complete disregard for the fourth wall, is the thistleswitch itself; which, beyond its function as the title of the story, causes a whole lot of trouble for everyone.


In other news, I've officially started work on the sequel.

Sunday, August 15, 2010

half a start

Attention: I have written half of the first sentence of Unnamed Companion to Thistleswitch. Be amazed. Be excited.

And, while I do mean for those commands to be taken sarcastically, I actually am amazed and excited. Half of a sentence may only be - well, half of a sentence - but it's still a start. Starting is half of the battle, my friends. Seeing as nothing I ever thought up seemed to be good enough to be the opener for a Thistleswitch book, a start that I'm happy with is fantastic.

Maybe I'll actually finish the sentence today! Wouldn't that be something?

Saturday, August 14, 2010

scary stuff

I wrote the majority of Thistleswitch without any prior knowledge of where the plot was going or what was going to happen next or what anything meant at all. The remarkable fiddle, the Whisperers, the thistleswitch itself...I didn't have a clue of the importance of any of them when they first made an appearance. I didn't plan out how many quests Aries would go on, or choreograph the battle scene, or decide that Kaye and Quicken would exist beforehand. I just wrote. And it worked.

So now that I just finished writing an outline of a giant chunk of the still-unnamed Jovie and Terrence story, I'm kind of freaked out. Writing without a plot works well for me. To put it into the words of Diana Wynne Jones, someone far more experienced than I (who happens to share my feelings exactly on this point): "I know how the story begins and how it ends, and I also know, in great detail, at least two scenes from somewhere in the middle. When I say great detail, I probably mean precise, total detail. Colours, speech, actions, and exactly where the furniture or outdoor scenery are and what they look like, are all with me vividly and ineradicably. Often I am quite mystified as to how you get from the beginning to one of these scenes, or from one of them to the end. Part of the joy of writing is finding out. And I deliberately do not ask more when I start to write, so that the book has room to keep its flavour and pursue its own logic."

Part of the reason that I was so thrilled to find this quote was that it seems to be agreed upon by the majority of authors out there that you should have your story completely planned out before you even start writing it, to make sure you avoid plotholes or contradictions. So, theoretically, I should be a good thing that I know so much about the story I plan on writing next.

But it doesn't feel like a good thing.

Thistleswitch had no plan, and it worked. I finished it, for goodness' sake. So if I deviate from the process - even in a way that most people seem to think will expedite it - will it change the outcome?

Logically, I know that I don't have to stick to this outline. I made decisions ahead of time for Thistleswitch that I later realized were lame or confusing, and I threw them to the wind without a second thought. Logically, I know that the story will take on a mind of its own once I actually get into the swing of it. So there's no reason to be scared of an outline.

And, as if that weren't enough, I'm also scared of The Chapter in Which We Become Acquainted With a Number of Important People and Places, which served as the prologue for Thistleswitch and will fulfill the same role for this new story. The first time around, I popped out that chapter so quickly and unexpectedly that it was like I was reading it as I wrote it. I had no idea where the idea came from or what story would follow, but I immediately fell in love. There was no pressure, because it was an entirely new thing. It was just fun.

Now, there's nothing but pressure, because, heck, this is the prologue, and if people don't like it than what the heck will make them want to read the second chapter? How will I get out all the information I need to in a sensible fashion? How will it all connect? What if I can't make it suitably thisleswitch-y? What if this whole novel thing was just a one time event?

I'm overthinking things. I realize that.

But that knowledge doesn't make a second full-length novel any less frightening.

Friday, August 13, 2010

i have not been writing...

...because I have been indulging in two rather admittedly unproductive pasttimes: the Sims and fan fiction.

First, the lesser of the two evils. We just got the new "Ambitions" expansion pack for The Sims 3, and I've been having a blast with it. I stayed up until three a.m. playing last night, which is an hours-straight-on-the-computer run worthy of competition with some writing nights. See, you can actually play your sim at their job in this one, so it's obviously awesome. Or something. And having a dad working as a fireman all day and saving lives, while mom takes care of two toddlers and two babies who time their poops so that she's changing diapers all day...this is computer gaming at it's finest.

Second...fan fiction. Yeah. Occasionally I'm guilty of indulging a bit in what I consider the lesser side of writer-dom. Not to rag on any fan fiction writers who may be reading this (there aren't any, because no one reads this). You may very well be one of the fantastic writers who make me read fan fiction at all. The problem is that you have to sift through about forty stories that are full of misspellings (or worse, textspeak...omg lulz) and mostly just focus on romantic fluff (which, okaaaay, that's basically why people read fan fiction in the first place, but plot is good, too) and have zero literary merit, just to get to the two stories that are awesome and written in the tone of the original author and completely worth reading. But I digress...the point is that, yes, I've been wading through the swamp of fanfiction.com in the past few days, just looking for good stories to read. And, drumrollllll....

I found one. I found a story that I wish was a completed, published novel, because then I could truthfully call it one of my favorite "books" instead of one of my favorite unfinished stories. A Girl Called Mouse is a take on Cinderella (which is why it's in the 'fairy tales fan fiction' section, you see) but it's so completely original and well written...it's sort of reminiscent of Cameron Dokey's style, which I love, but so far I love this story muuuch better than Dokey's version of it. I even considered making an account on fanfiction.com (gasp!) just so that I could review the story and tell the author how much I loved it. I haven't (yet?).

And all this time, what's become of Thistleswitch? I printed out a complete rough draft. It's beautiful, with its black inky words and papery smell and hefty weight and neat little paragraphs. Though, perhaps I'm biased. I've been figuring out some stuff (finally figured out a bit more about the elusive Switching Spot!) and correcting the spelling mistakes that Word lets slip. And I finally named the kingdom that Aries, Niko and Merry are from! On top of that, I started a document for Jovie and Terrence's story, finally. I haven't written any of the story itself yet...but I'll get there. Soon. I can feel the thistleswitch-ish inspiration flitting around the edges of my mind, not quite close enough to use but certainly close enough to sense. And when it finally does make a solid appearance - probably by waking me up at four a.m. and DEMANDING that I write something RIGHT THIS INSTANT - I'll have a document all ready for it. And, to top it all off, I've come up with another story idea that I love and will probably use for NaNoWriMo this year, and I've added a couple ideas to my snippets document (though, I'm always adding stuff to my snippets document, so I shouldn't report that like it's something snazzy).

So, between the fanfics and simming spurts, it's been a successful week.

Sunday, August 8, 2010

home again, home again

So...it's been a while. Exactly one month since I finished Thistleswitch, in fact.

It's not really my fault (she justified to her non-readers, who probably didn't care in the first place). We've been on vacation. I went to Europe, baby! And, while I didn't use a computer at all in those two weeks, I hopefully gathered up some life experiences that will help out with my writing.

I haven't done any "real" writing, yet. For some reason, starting a new document for my next story is kind of a stressful idea to me. It freaks me out to picture another blank document that I have to try to fill up with non-crap. So I've been adding bits and pieces of new ideas to my brainstorming document, and that's about it.

Maybe I'll write soon.

Then again, I just got nine new books at Borders. So...maybe I'll write "soon".